For this activity, let’s imagine that you were Neil Armstrong.
On the Moon!
Cruising in my little spaceship,
I felt a little dip.
Woah, what just happened out there,
I think we are nearly here.
I quickly land,
It looks like sand.
I am scared, what is outside,
I open the door and I glide.
I lower down,
And place my shoes on the ground.
Looks like powder on my boots,
This is going to be such a hoot.
I better get a photo on my new iphone,
Before I head home.
Click, Click, Click.
Off I go back to the beautiful cloudy world.
Cruising in my little spaceship,
I felt a little dip.
Woah, what just happened out there,
I think we are nearly here.
I quickly land,
It looks like sand.
I am scared, what is outside,
I open the door and I glide.
I lower down,
And place my shoes on the ground.
Looks like powder on my boots,
This is going to be such a hoot.
I better get a photo on my new iphone,
Before I head home.
Click, Click, Click.
Off I go back to the beautiful cloudy world.
Hello Tanner its Mahuta here. Have you got a chance to comment on my blog yet? Anyway i really like your blog post. It is so cool. I really like your poem because it sounded cool and I enjoyed reading it. Hopefully you can post more cool stuff like this. Maybe you could make a cool drawing of you on the moon that would be even cooler.
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Kia ora Tanner,
ReplyDeleteit's me, Ronan! How are you today? I liked your poem about landing on the moon. Did you know who Neil Armstrong was? Your poem had some really funny rhymes and I liked how you said 'I better get a photo with my new iPhone.' Though, I don't think back then would have iPhone. At lease not like the iPhone you are used to. Maybe you should add some more colour to make it a bit more funky!
From Ronan
Kia ora Tanner,
ReplyDeleteHow are you today? I hope you had a fun christmas with your whanau!
I really enjoyed reading your poem about how you would have felt as Neil Armstrong, landing on the moon for the first time. You've done really well to include your feelings, and what it looked like - ka pai!
I agree with Ronan, your sentence about the iphone made me laugh! I don't think they would have had iphones then, but I like that you included it in your poem. Very funny!
Keep up the great work!
Tayla