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Monday, 11 June 2018

Handwriting Term 2

We have been learning to form our letters correctly and to use capital letters in the correct place.
I am good at sitting my letters on the line.

I need to get better at adding more detail.

Friday, 8 June 2018

Animal Town writing

This week we have used another picture as motivation for our writing. We had a story starter and then we had to carry on the story.
What I like about my writing is I have good fullstops.
I need to improve on more detail.

Here is my writing about Animal Town.

Animal town
I am going to be an animal in animal town. My  animal is a black panther. I can jump over cars and animals. I have sharp claws and sharp teeth. I can scratch the cars and the fluffy bears and trees. I can run really fast. I can splash through muddy puddles and mud. I can roar really loud. I have black stripes on me. I can scratch other animals. I have brown eyes. I can fight other animals. The zebra was too slow so I pushed it out of the way. I have a scratch on my eye. I can kill animals that get in my way. I am really strong and tough. I have a bit of brown on me.




ASB getwise

This writing about ASB Get wise

Golf



We have been learning how to play golf.
Mr Golf came on Thursday and taught us about golf.
He taught us about hitting the ball high.

I liked the finals.

I am good at at hitting the ball really far.

I need to work on hitting the ball high.


Hot Air Balloon

This week we have used a picture as motivation for our writing. We had a story starter and then we had to carry on the story. What I like about my writing is my captain.

I need to improve on spelling. We also made a google draw showing the things that we would take with us in on the balloon.
By Tanner
Balloon.

I can see cars and bridges! I am so excited that I am on a hot air balloon. I only take 3 people on board. With the money, I would buy a jet-ski and a monster truck that has horns on it. I was so excited I was waiting for a long time for this race. If I win I might be rich and famous. The race was so fun that I wanted to do it again.

Friday, 25 May 2018

The Pou


As part of our writing programme we have been doing environmental writing. We had to sketch an object and as we were sketching we wrote down thoughts that we had. Then we wrote our thoughts down  as a poem. We cut out the sketch and added this to our writing.


Wednesday, 11 April 2018

Handwriting sample



We have been learning to form our letters correctly and to use capital letters in the correct place.I am good at keeping my letters on the line .I need to get better at making my some of my letters hang under the line.